Over this week I have been improving past assignment work. These are assignments which I have completed over this year. The main aspects of improving my work was the written documents. I improved work from my TV Advert assignment and also my Magazine Assignment. The main improvement which I to make was my punctuation. I have looked back over the documents which needed improving, and I improved my sentence structure within the documents. These documents included: Research into Final Product, Market Research Documents, and Justification Documents. These are the documents which I improved by re-writing with better sentence structure. In terms of my TV Advert work: I researched into Team Roles, Researched into the Target Audience in detail and was more critical within my Skills Profile.
Through improving my work, especially in terms of my sentence structure. I have been able to look at my work and understand what my sentence structure should be like. As this has made me aware of how long my sentences are, I have been aware of this when writing documents for the programme assignment. I hope that the improvements which I have been acquired to make have improved my grade. I am more aware of the points which I have been given for improvements, and I will consider these when completing future production work.
